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TKM Analytical Essay

Assignment:
Write a formal essay in response to To Kill a Mockingbird. For your assignment, respond to the following prompt:

What is the purpose of education?


Scout makes several references to education and her opinion of the formal system in the first part of the novel. Refer to To Kill a Mockingbird, either paraphrasing an event or directly quoting it (no longer than 2 sentences quoted, please) and include in-text citation (Last Name page number). You are required to make mention of TKM in at least one of your body paragraphs; you may do more, if desired. Also consider using other sources, either read in this class or those you've read on your own, to help defend your answer to the prompt. Keep in mind that there are several types of education a person may receive in his or her lifetime, not just “book smarts.”


Requirements:
·Your paper needs to be 500-1,000 words, broken down into 5 paragraphs
o Although I will not require your essay to be typed, I highly suggest it. If you choose to handwrite your paper, it must be legible, above all else, and double-spaced with writing on every other line (no writing on the backs of pages, either). If you choose to type your paper, it must be double-spaced, Times New Roman font, size 12-point only.

·Your paper needs to be in MLA format (this includes a heading in the top, left-hand corner; an appropriate title; and a header) *ask if you need help with this! :)

·Your paper must have a Works Cited page (also in correct MLA format)

·You must use formal, standard English (No Slang! This is a formal essay, not a note, text message or IM to a friend!)

·You need to include your word count after the last sentence of your final paragraph. Be honest. (Do not include the Works Cited in the word count.)


Helpful Tips:
·Do not use the second person (you) in this essay

·Do not use statements such as “In this essay I will tell you about…,” “In the following paragraph you will read about…,” etc.

·Your first paragraph should briefly introduce your topic, starting with an exciting and interesting attention grabber. Consider starting with a quote (not necessarily from TKM), as long as it is appropriate for your topic. Your introduction should end with a three part thesis. (Ex: The purpose of education is to _______, _______, and _______.)

·Your body paragraphs should follow in the same order you listed them in your thesis. Make sure to provide enough detail to support your answer to the prompt.

·Your conclusion should review the main points in your essay. Rephrase your thesis and include it at the beginning of your conclusion.


**In-class work time will depend on you. We will work on this today (Thurs. 5/8), and your work ethic will determine the amount of time you receive tomorrow. You will also need to keep up with the assigned reading, study guide questions, and vocabulary.

Final copy due: Tuesday, May 13, 2008
Total points: 150

lit devices: types of writing 1

allegory: a story in which people, things, and actions represent an idea or generalization about life; allegories often have a strong moral or lesson example: Allegory of the Cave by Plato

autobiography: an author's account or story of her or his own life example: Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, an American Slave

biography: the story of a person's life written by another person example: Albert Einstein: a Biography

comedy: literature that deals with life in a humorous or satiric manner; in comedy, human errors or problems appear funny; comedies end on a happy note example: The Taming of the Shrew *

drama: the form of literature known as plays; but drama also refers to the type of serious play that is often concerned with the leading character's relationship to society example: 12 Angry Men

epic: a long narrative poem that tells of the deeds and adventures of a hero example: The Epic of Gilgamesh

epitaph: a short poem or verse written in memory of someone example: famous epitaphs

essay: a piece of prose that expresses an individual's point of view; usually, it is a series of closely related paragraphs that combine to make a complete piece of writing example: "Self-Reliance"

fantasy: a piece of prose that takes place in a nonexistent and unreal world, such as fairyland, or concerns incredible and unreal characters, or relies on scientific principles not yet discovered or contrary to present experience example: The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe

fiction: narrative writing drawn from the imagination rather than from history or fact example: Wicked

genre: refers to a category or type of literature based on its style, form, and content

gothic novel: a type of fiction that is usually characterized by gloomy castles, ghosts, and supernatural or sensational happenings -- creating a mysterious, chilling, and sometimes frightening story example: Frankenstein

legend: a narrative or tradition handed down from the past; distinguished from a myth by having more of a historical truth and perhaps less of the supernatural; legends often indicate the lore of a people and thus serve as at least partial expressions of a national spirit example: King Arthur

memoir: a form of autobiographical writing dealing usually with the recollections of one who has been a part of or has witnessed significant events; memoirs differ from autobiographies in that they are usually concerned with personalities and actions other than those of the writer, whereas autobiographies stress the inner and private lives of their subjects example: Out of Africa

Standard 5, Writing

Standard 5, Writing: Applications (Different Types of Writing and Their Characteristics)

At Grade 10, students combine the rhetorical strategies of narration, exposition, persuasion, and description in texts (research reports of 1,000 to 1,500 words or more). Students compose business letters. Student writing demonstrates a command of Standard English and the research, organizational, and drafting strategies outlined in Standard 4 — Writing Processes and Features. Writing demonstrates an awareness of the audience (intended reader) and purpose for writing.

In addition to producing the different writing forms introduced in earlier grades, Grade 10 students use the writing strategies outlined in Standard 4 — Writing Processes and Features to:

10.5.1
Write biographical or autobiographical narratives or short stories that:
• describe a sequence of events and communicate the significance of the events to the audience.
• locate scenes and incidents in specific places.
• describe with specific details the sights, sounds, and smells of a scene and the specific actions, movements, gestures, and feelings of the characters; in the case of short stories or autobiographical narratives, use interior monologue (what the character says silently to self) to show the character’s feelings.
• pace the presentation of actions to accommodate changes in time and mood.
Example: After reading an example of an autobiography, such as Helen Keller’s Story of My Life, use the structure of the autobiography to compose an autobiography of your own.

10.5.2
Write responses to literature that:
• demonstrate a comprehensive grasp of the significant ideas of literary works.
• support statements with evidence from the text.
• demonstrate awareness of the author’s style and an appreciation of the effects created.
• identify and assess the impact of ambiguities, nuances, and complexities within the text.
• extend writing by changing mood, plot, characterization, or voice.
Example: After reading a short story, such as “The No-Guitar Blues” by Gary Soto, “The Lottery” by Shirley Jackson, or “The Metamorphosis” by Franz Kafka, write responses that address each of the bulleted points.

10.5.3
Write expository compositions, including analytical essays, summaries, descriptive pieces, or literary analyses that:
• gather evidence in support of a thesis (position on the topic), including information on all relevant perspectives.
• communicate information and ideas from primary and secondary sources accurately and coherently.
• make distinctions between the relative value and significance of specific data, facts, and ideas.
• use a variety of reference sources, including word, pictorial, audio, and Internet sources to locate information in support of a topic.
• include visual aids by using technology to organize and record information on charts, maps, and graphs.
• anticipate and address readers’ potential misunderstandings, biases, and expectations.
• use technical terms and notations correctly.
Example: On self-selected appropriate topics, keep an academic log that lists essential student-generated questions on the topic, information in response to each question from a variety of sources including word, pictorial, audio, and Internet resources complete with accurate citations. When each question has been researched, summarize in your own words how you would synthesize the information in order to arrive at an overall thesis on the topic. Write an essay on the thesis.

10.5.4
Write persuasive compositions that:
• organize ideas and appeals in a sustained and effective fashion with the strongest emotional appeal first and the least powerful one last.
• use specific rhetorical (communication) devices to support assertions, such as appealing to logic through reasoning; appealing to emotion or ethical belief; or relating a personal anecdote, case study, or analogy.
• clarify and defend positions with precise and relevant evidence, including facts, expert opinions, quotations, expressions of commonly accepted beliefs, and logical reasoning.
• address readers’ concerns, counterclaims, biases, and expectations.
Example: Write a letter to a television network to persuade the network to keep a program on the air despite low ratings.

10.5.5
Write business letters that:
• provide clear and purposeful information and address the intended audience appropriately.
• show appropriate use of vocabulary, tone, and style that takes into account the intended audience’s knowledge about and interest in the topic and the nature of the audience’s relationship to the writer.
• emphasize main ideas or images.
• follow a conventional style with page formats, fonts (typeface), and spacing that contribute to the documents’ readability and impact.
Example: Write a letter of support or complaint in response to service that you received at a store or restaurant. Address the letter to the manager, including a clear account of the incident and requesting that he or she take appropriate action in response.

10.5.6
Write technical documents, such as a manual on rules of behavior for conflict resolution, procedures for conducting a meeting, or minutes of a meeting that:
• report information and express ideas logically and correctly.
• offer detailed and accurate specifications.
• include scenarios, definitions, and examples to aid comprehension.
• anticipate readers’ problems, mistakes, and misunderstandings.
Example: Take notes while watching or listening to a physical therapist give instructions on the proper way to lift, carry, or move large objects. Incorporate these notes into a safety manual to be used in the classroom or in a job setting.

10.5.7
Use varied and expanded vocabulary, appropriate for specific forms and topics.
Example: Write a sentence for use in a formal letter of complaint: The thermostat is dangerously defective as it fails to maintain a safe temperature, and I am seeking a replacement or full refund.

10.5.8
Write for different purposes and audiences, adjusting tone, style, and voice as appropriate.

Research Application

10.5.9
Write or deliver a research report that has been developed using a systematic research process (defines the topic, gathers information, determines credibility, reports findings) and that:
• uses information from a variety of sources (books, technology, multimedia), distinguishes between primary and secondary documents, and documents sources independently by using a consistent format for citations.
• synthesizes information gathered from a variety of sources, including technology and one’s own research, and evaluates information for its relevance to the research questions.
• demonstrates that information that has been gathered has been summarized, that the topic has been refined through this process, and that conclusions have been drawn from synthesizing information.
• demonstrates that sources have been evaluated for accuracy, bias, and credibility.
• organizes information by classifying, categorizing, and sequencing, and demonstrates the distinction between one’s own ideas from the ideas of others, and includes a bibliography (Works Cited).
Example: Write a report on the Globe Theatre, gathering information from books, such as Shakespeare’s Theatre by Jacqueline Morley, videos such as “Shakespeare’s Globe Theatre Restored,” and Web sites by using a key word search for “Shakespeare” and “Globe Theatre.” Explain why the theatre was significant in the development of Shakespeare’s works.

Standard 2, Reading

Standard 2, Reading: Comprehension and Analysis of Nonfiction and Informational Text

Students read and understand grade-level-appropriate material. The selections in the Indiana Reading List (www.doe.state.in.us/standards/readinglist.html) illustrate the quality and complexity of the materials to be read by students. At Grade 10, in addition to regular classroom reading, students read a wide variety of nonfiction, such as biographies, autobiographies, books in many different subject areas, essays, speeches, magazines, newspapers, reference materials, technical documents, and online information.

Structural Features of Informational and Technical Materials

10.2.1
Analyze the structure and format of various informational documents and explain how authors use the features to achieve their purposes.
Example: Analyze an advertisement that has been made to look like the informational newspaper or magazine text around it. Explain why the advertisement would be designed this way and evaluate its effectiveness.

Analysis of Grade-Level-Appropriate Nonfiction and Informational Text

10.2.2
Extend — through original analysis, evaluation, and elaboration — ideas presented in primary or secondary sources.
Example: Read first-hand accounts and newspaper accounts of an historical event, such as the sinking of the Titanic, and compare them to more recent texts about the event.

10.2.3
Demonstrate use of sophisticated technology by following technical directions.
Example: Follow the directions to use a spreadsheet or database program on the computer. Follow the directions to download informational text files or articles from a Web site.

10.2.5
Make reasonable statements and draw conclusions about a text, supporting them with accurate examples.

Expository (Informational) Critique

10.2.4
Evaluate an author’s argument or defense of a claim by examining the relationship between generalizations and evidence, the comprehensiveness of evidence, and the way in which the author’s intent affects the structure and tone of the text.
Example: Evaluate science articles by judging the references, the author’s presentation of facts and opinions, and the date of publication. Evaluate different arguments on a legal issue, such as the legal age for getting a driver’s license.

Mini Compare/Contrast -- Romeo and Juliet videos

the overview:
Franco Zeffirelli and Baz Luhrmann, two revolutionary directors of their time, showcased their expertise in their film adaptations of Shakespeare's classic love story Romeo and Juliet. Although audiences praised their work, critics found reason to berate the films. Critics found fault with Zeffirelli for casting a voluptuous, 15-year old Olivia Hussey to play the part of 13-and-a-half year-old Juliet. Critics viewed Luhrmann's setting, Verona Beach, and its cast of colorful characters (including a cross-dressing Mercutio, played by Harold Perrineau) as too far removed from the dusty, hot streets of Medeival Verona, Italy. Although both directors took creative liberties with Shakespeare's play, including re-arranging or deleting scenes, removing or adapting characters, and editing lines or stage directions, they share a similarity: both men felt a need to present a beautiful story to an audience in a way which could be understood, and for this, they deserve praise.

the assignment:
We will think about and respond to the two film adaptations of Romeo and Juliet. Unlike previous writings, we will not create an outline or a rough draft, although I will offer to proofread/correct rough copies before the final is due. And unlike the other essays, this one will also be significantly shorter (500 words in length). No title page will be necessary. Include a MLA heading on the top, left corner of your paper and a title, centered, below the heading. Start your paper on the next line. And, as always, double-space, whether hand-written or typed. This essay is due on Wednesday, November 22.

No more than 1/3 of your sentences should contain "be" verbs. Do not include 1st or 2nd person pronouns in this piece. Eliminate statements such as "I think" or "I believe." Never write "In this paper I will tell you" or "In this paper you will find." Papers with statements of this manner will be returned, ungraded, for correction. As Honors students, you should be beyond this type of vocabulary / word usage.

In a true compare/contrast paper, you should have four paragraphs. Start with an introduction, complete with attention getter, background information, and thesis statement. If I wrote about both entire movies, I'd write a thesis statement like the one below. Remember, a thesis statement tells the subject of my entire paper. My goal is to compare and contrast the two movies; therefore, I must mention comparing and contrasting, similarities and differences, or some other terminology related to this concept, in my thesis statement.

Although both directors took creative liberties with Shakespeare's play,
including re-arranging or deleting scenes, removing or adapting characters, and
editing lines or stage directions
, they share a similarity: both men felt a need
to present a beautiful story to an audience in a way which could be
understood
, and for this, they deserve praise.


My paper will follow the order of my thesis. If I mention differences first, my first body paragraph must be about the differences between both movies. A compare / contrast essay CANNOT contain a paragraph about one topic and a separate paragraph about another. You must include both topics in both body paragraphs.

You should include direct quotes from the play in this essay. You will need at least one quote from your scene in each of the two body paragraphs. Look at the example below.

"Where be these enemies? Capulet! Montague! / See what a scourge is laid upon
your hate, / that heaven finds means to kill your joys with love" (RJ 5.3.291-293).


As with all formal writings, include your word count at the end of your essay. To review my requirements for formal writings, visit the link below: http://english9h.blogspot.com/2006/08/format-of-formal-writings.html

the content:
Concentrate on one of three scenes: the balcony scene (Act 2, scene 2); Juliet and the Nurse's scene (Act 2, scene 5); or the fight scene (Act 3, scene 1).

extra help:
As always, if you feel like you need help beyond what is available in the classroom, I will be available before school 7:00-7:30 and after school until 4:30. I also check my email daily and may provide assistance this way as well. I cannot provide assistance if you do not ask; claiming to "not understand" an assignment and not asking for help is inexcusable. If you do not ask for help I will assume you understand the assignment and plan to turn it in, completed, on the due date. Again, this assignment will NOT be accepted late, so plan appropriately.

the value:
mini compare/contrast essay, including work cited page -- 100 points

work cited:
A work cited page must contain the resources cited in the essay. Look at the examples below for help. Remember, you must hang indent your entry. Also include the words Work Cited, centered, before the entry.

English office copy:
Shakespeare, William. The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet. Austin: Holt, Rinehart and Winston, 1994.

No Fear Shakespeare:
Shakespeare, William. No Fear Shakespeare: Romeo and Juliet. New York: Spark Notes, 2003.

Simply Shakespeare:
Shakespeare, William. Simply Shakespeare: Romeo and Juliet. Hauppauge: Barron's Educational Series, 2002.

Cliff's Complete:
Shakespeare, William. Cliff's Complete: Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet. New York: Hungry Minds, 2000.

resources:

Romeo and Juliet Trailer, Cast, Movies -- New York Times
http://movies2.nytimes.com/gst/movies/movie.html?v_id=42021

Wikipedia Entry: Franco Zephirelli
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Franco_Zeffirelli

Wikipedia Entry: Romeo+Juliet
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romeo_and_Juliet_(1996_film)

Wikipedia Entry: Baz Luhrmann
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baz_Luhrmann

Indiana State Academic Standards met by this project: 9.1.2, 9.3.2, 9.3.3, 9.3.4, 9.3.5, 9.3.8, 9.4.1, 9.4.2, 9.4.3, 9.4.13, 9.4.5, 9.4.6, 9.4.7, 9.4.8, 9.4.10, 9.4.11, 9.4.12, 9.5.2, 9.5.3, 9.5.7, 9.5.8, 9.6.1, 9.6.2, 9.6.3, 9.6.4, 9.7.7, 9.7.8, 9.7.10, 9.7.13

Daily Agenda 10/23

Today, we accomplished...

  • turned in rough drafts for compare / contrast essay
  • took survey: conflict of interests -- will retake survey after reading RJ
  • started discussing Romeo and Juliet
  • discussed characters
  • received flow chart with "struggles" as center
  • vocab due Friday

Daily Agenda 10/20

Today, we accomplished...

  • finished meeting with groups to discuss topics / outlines / rough drafts
  • worked individually on rough drafts
  • remember, rough drafts should be double spaced and include a title page, the essay, and a works cited page

Daily Agenda 10/19

Today, we accomplished...

  • returned graded outlines
  • met with topic groups to discuss outlines / rough drafts
  • worked on rough drafts individually
  • (rough drafts due Monday -- no late work accepted on this!)

Sample Outline--Compare & Contrast essay

Student Name

Mrs. Feller

English 9H

18 October 2006


Outline for Compare/Contrast Essay --

Climaxes in Frederick Douglass and Night


I. Introduction


A. Attention getter: In the pinnacle moment when one looks inwardly

and discovers the true self, one may find strength while others discover a

shell encasing disregarded and abandoned opportunity.


B. Background information (Frederick Douglass): After facing the daily

oppression of slave life, frequent changes in ownership, and deaths of

family and acquaintances, Frederick Douglass leaves Master Thomas to

work as a hired slave for Edward Covey. Although active in the church,

Covey lashes out against Frederick and the other slaves, maintaining his

reputation as a “slave-breaker” (Douglass 58). The climax in Douglass’

autobiography occurs after Covey nearly beats Frederick to death, and

Frederick appeals to Master Thomas for help. Master Thomas sends him

back to Covey, and a couple days later, Covey attempts to whip

Frederick once more. However, Frederick “resolve[s] to fight,” “seize[s]

Covey hard by the throat,” and thus creates a hopeful turning-point for

him in his long journey toward freedom (Douglass 69).


C. Background information (Night): A. Wiesel, too, struggles toward

freedom from his bondage. Throughout his memoir, Wiesel depicts

horrendous acts of genocide he observes during the Holocaust, including

the slaughter of innocent youths, senseless murder of invalids, and

other, unpredictable executions. After surviving numerous selections

and a long death march, Elie and his father arrive at Buchenwald. Soon

after, Elie’s father suffers from dysentery and dies. Three months later,

the Americans rescue the survivors left at Buchenwald, including Elie.

The climax of his autobiography occurs at the end, when Elie finally

views himself in a mirror – the first time since he left the ghetto. Yet Elie

does not discover hope as he peers into the eyes of the reflection. “From

the depths of the mirror, a corpse gaze[s] back” (Wiesel 77).


D. Thesis statement: The climaxes represent change in the narrators of

Frederick Douglass and Night; however, Elie realizes his lack of self-

knowledge whereas Frederick’s idea of self comes to fruition.


II. Compare


A. Topic sentence: The climaxes of Frederick Douglass and Night both

signify a culmination of their times as victims of injustices.


B. Supporting details: both characters start naïve


C. Supporting details: both characters experience a realization


D. Supporting details: both use their own strength when the climax

occurs


III. Contrast


A. Topic sentence: The climaxes of Frederick Douglass and Night

represent moments of realization for the two narrators; Frederick finds

strength, and Elie sees his frailty.


B. Supporting details: climax of Frederick Douglass occurs midway

through autobiography; climax of Night occurs at the end


i. Frederick Douglass contains chapters reflecting the effect of the

climax; Frederick’s life positively affected by the climax


ii. Night ends with the climax signifying limitations / no where else

to go; his life is the Holocaust and its events; Holocaust consumes his life

and himself


C. Supporting details: hopeful/positive climax of Frederick Douglass;

gloomy/negative climax of Night


IV. Conclusion


A. Restate/reword thesis: Although both narrators seek and discover

the “self” in the climaxes of Frederick Douglass and Night, their findings

differ greatly.

Daily Agenda 10/17

Today, we accomplished...

  • discussed criteria for compare/contrast essay
  • went down to lab
  • discussed questions/concerns for essay
  • found literary device terms

Literary Analysis Paper: Frederick Douglass and Night

the overview:
Frederick Douglass and Elie Wiesel both impacted their audiences through their writings. However, their similarities reach far beyond surface connections: both men suffered injustices based on elements of themselves they could not control; both found the strength to survive; both sought a truth they knew could not be found within themselves. By taking a deeper look at the texts, one may also find connections in the religious allusions, imagery, thematic elements (such as hope, knowledge, age, responsibility, or self-reflection), the importance of voice, specific characters or roles, and repetition. By analysing these autobiographies, one may hope to create a well-written, four-paragraph essay which discusses both the similarities and differences of these two pieces.

the assignment:
We will think about and respond to the two autobiographies we completed thus far: Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass and Night. We will complete three parts to this compare and contrast / analytical essay: an outline (due Thursday, 10/19 during first period); a rough draft, including a separate works cited page (due Monday, 10/23, at the beginning of the period); and a final copy, including works cited page (due date TBA). Again, a "rough" copy should be as complete and correct as possible. I will mark "kinds" of errors only once in a paper (i.e., if you do not capitalize the first letter your sentences, I will mark the first sentence and no subsequent sentences). Due to time constraints on this assignment and the desire to not take any more time away from our Romeo and Juliet unit, I will NOT be accepting late work for this project, except in the case of excused absences. If you are present, the paper is due. This paper will focus not only on following criteria but sticking to deadlines as well.

Your outline should have four parts: an introduction, two body points (one for comparison and one for contrast), and a conclusion. Thus, your essay should correlate with this and contain exactly four paragraphs. Word count should be between 500-1000 words, total. No more than 1/3 of your sentences should contain "be" verbs. Do not include 1st or 2nd person pronouns in this piece. Eliminate statements such as "I think" or "I believe."

You should include direct quotes from both pieces in your writing to support your ideas. Be as specific as possible. Broad statements such as "both men suffered hardships" or "both men survived a lot" will earn little points. Be specific without being melodramatic. To learn how to include in-text notation (direct quotes), visit this link. It will also explain a works cited page. For additional help, visit the Purdue Online Writing Lab's MLA section.

As with all formal writings, include your word count at the end of your essay. Follow all other standard procedures for formal writings, including title page and double spacing. To review my requirements for formal writings, visit the link below: http://english9h.blogspot.com/2006/08/format-of-formal-writings.html

the content:

Only five students may sign up for each topic below. Choose carefully; you will not be able to change once you've signed up. Notice both books, Frederick Douglass and Night, appear in all choices; you cannot write a compare/contrast essay over one book. Both must be included in your essay.

  • Religious allusions in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Dark / light imagery in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Hope in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Understatement/overstatement OR ambiguity/hyperbole in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Knowledge in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Self-reflection OR the impact of "event" on self v. whole in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Importance of voice/speaking out in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Hugh Auld v. Moche the Beadle as teachers
  • Mother figures (or lack of) in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Repetition of words in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Responsibility in Frederick Douglass and Night
  • Age / impact of age in Frederick Douglass and Night
extra help:
As always, if you feel like you need help beyond what is available in the classroom, I will be available after school Wednesday, 10/18 in Benjamin's Learning Center (located on the first floor behind the cafeteria) until 3:45pm; Thursday, 10/19 in my classroom before school 7:00-7:25am and after school until 4:30pm; Friday, 10/20 in my classroom before school 7:00-7:25am and after school until 4:30pm. I also check my email daily and may provide assistance this way as well. I cannot provide assistance if you do not ask; claiming to "not understand" an assignment and not asking for help is inexcusable. If you do not ask for help I will assume you understand the assignment and plan to turn it in, completed, on the due date. Again, this assignment will NOT be accepted late, so plan appropriately.

the values:
outline of analysis essay -- 50 points
rough copy of essay, including works cited page -- 100 points
final copy of essay, including works cited page-- 200 points

resources: (*please note spacing will not appear correct via the Internet; please refer to the handouts for specifics on spacing)

sample outline: http://english9h.blogspot.com/2006/10/sample-outline-compare-contrast-essay.html

sample essay:

sample works cited page:

Indiana State Academic Standards met by this project: 9.3.2, 9.3.5, 9.3.9, 9.4.1, 9.4.2, 9.4.3, 9.4.13, 9.4.5, 9.4.7, 9.4.8, 9.4.10, 9.4.11, 9.4.12, 9.5.3, 9.6.1, 9.6.2, 9.6.3, 9.6.4

Daily Agenda 10/16

Today, we accomplished...

  • finished reading/discussing Chapter 9 in Night
  • returned tests/literary responses
  • need to complete portfolio reflection on responses -- due tomorrow
  • vocabulary lessons 17-18 due tomorrow
  • discussed literary devices 1-45 today
  • will finish literary devices tomorrow
  • will go to lab tomorrow and start talking about literary analysis

Standard 5: Writing: Applications

(Different Types of Writing and Their Characteristics)

At Grade 9, students combine the rhetorical strategies of narration, exposition,
persuasion, and description in texts (research reports of 1,000 to 1,500 words
or more). Students begin to write documents related to career development.
Student writing demonstrates a command of Standard English and the research,
organizational, and drafting strategies outlined in Standard 4 — Writing
Processes and Features. Writing demonstrates an awareness of the audience
(intended reader) and purpose for writing.

9.5.1 Biographical or autobiographical narratives or short stories

9.5.2 Responses to literature

9.5.3 Expository compositions, including analytical essays

9.5.4 Persuasive compositions

9.5.5 Documents related to career development

9.5.6 Technical documents

9.5.7 Use varied and expanded vocabulary, appropriate for specific forms and topics.
Example: Write a formal and persuasive speech using words that will convince an audience to accept your point of view.

9.5.8 Write for different purposes and audiences, adjusting tone, style, and voice as appropriate.

9.5.9 Research report

Expository (informational) presentations

According to the Indiana Department of Education's Academic Standards for English 9

9.7.15 Deliver expository (informational) presentations that:

  • provide evidence in support of a thesis and related claims, including information on all relevant perspectives.
  • convey information and ideas from primary and secondary sources accurately and coherently.
  • make distinctions between the relative value and significance of specific data, facts, and ideas.
  • include visual aids by employing appropriate technology to organize and display information on charts, maps, and graphs.
  • anticipate and address the listeners’ potential misunderstandings, biases, and expectations.
  • use technical terms and notations accurately.

Expository or Analytical Pieces

According to the Indiana Department of Education Academic Standards for English, grade 9,

9.5.3 Write expository compositions, including analytical essays, summaries, descriptive pieces, or literary analyses that:


  • gather evidence in support of a thesis (position on the topic), including information on all relevant perspectives.
  • communicate information and ideas from primary and secondary sources accurately and coherently.
  • make distinctions between the relative value and significance of specific data, facts, and ideas.
  • use a variety of reference sources, including word, pictorial, audio, and Internet sources, to locate information in support of topic.
  • include visual aids by using technology to organize and record information on charts, data tables, maps, and graphs.
  • anticipate and address readers’ potential misunderstandings, biases, and expectations.
  • use technical terms and notations accurately.

Go to our analytical essay project, semester 1