Student Name
Mrs. Feller
English 9H
18 October 2006
Outline for Compare/Contrast Essay --
Climaxes in Frederick Douglass and Night
I. Introduction
A. Attention getter: In the pinnacle moment when one looks inwardly
and discovers the true self, one may find strength while others discover a
shell encasing disregarded and abandoned opportunity.
B. Background information (Frederick Douglass): After facing the daily
oppression of slave life, frequent changes in ownership, and deaths of
family and acquaintances, Frederick Douglass leaves Master Thomas to
work as a hired slave for Edward Covey. Although active in the church,
Covey lashes out against Frederick and the other slaves, maintaining his
reputation as a “slave-breaker” (Douglass 58). The climax in Douglass’
autobiography occurs after Covey nearly beats Frederick to death, and
Frederick appeals to Master Thomas for help. Master Thomas sends him
back to Covey, and a couple days later, Covey attempts to whip
Frederick once more. However, Frederick “resolve[s] to fight,” “seize[s]
Covey hard by the throat,” and thus creates a hopeful turning-point for
him in his long journey toward freedom (Douglass 69).
C. Background information (Night): A. Wiesel, too, struggles toward
freedom from his bondage. Throughout his memoir, Wiesel depicts
horrendous acts of genocide he observes during the Holocaust, including
the slaughter of innocent youths, senseless murder of invalids, and
other, unpredictable executions. After surviving numerous selections
and a long death march, Elie and his father arrive at Buchenwald. Soon
after, Elie’s father suffers from dysentery and dies. Three months later,
the Americans rescue the survivors left at Buchenwald, including Elie.
The climax of his autobiography occurs at the end, when Elie finally
views himself in a mirror – the first time since he left the ghetto. Yet Elie
does not discover hope as he peers into the eyes of the reflection. “From
the depths of the mirror, a corpse gaze[s] back” (Wiesel 77).
D. Thesis statement: The climaxes represent change in the narrators of
Frederick Douglass and Night; however, Elie realizes his lack of self-
knowledge whereas Frederick’s idea of self comes to fruition.
II. Compare
A. Topic sentence: The climaxes of Frederick Douglass and Night both
signify a culmination of their times as victims of injustices.
B. Supporting details: both characters start naïve
C. Supporting details: both characters experience a realization
D. Supporting details: both use their own strength when the climax
occurs
III. Contrast
A. Topic sentence: The climaxes of Frederick Douglass and Night
represent moments of realization for the two narrators; Frederick finds
strength, and Elie sees his frailty.
B. Supporting details: climax of Frederick Douglass occurs midway
through autobiography; climax of Night occurs at the end
i. Frederick Douglass contains chapters reflecting the effect of the
climax; Frederick’s life positively affected by the climax
ii. Night ends with the climax signifying limitations / no where else
to go; his life is the Holocaust and its events; Holocaust consumes his life
and himself
C. Supporting details: hopeful/positive climax of Frederick Douglass;
gloomy/negative climax of Night
IV. Conclusion
A. Restate/reword thesis: Although both narrators seek and discover
the “self” in the climaxes of Frederick Douglass and Night, their findings
differ greatly.